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This gets rather suggestive, also a slight language warning. I am also no longer noting the lemon to this.

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Dinner was awkward, (Name) was finding it hard to eat and was more like swirling her food around with a fork. The two brothers who had basically abducted her, though she was willing, looked at her curious as to why she was being so nervous. They hadn’t threatened her…they hadn’t even been rude to her. The Canadian actually asked why she wasn’t eating and she shook her head telling them that she wasn’t that hungry.

“Well this is what you’ve got for now.” Alfred told her, “Ollie’s not the biggest fan of midnight snacking.”

She nodded understanding, “I’m just not that hungry.”

Both brothers nodded and watched her intently from the corners of their eyes. She was nervous, she could feel their eyes. She was curious, why were they being nice to her? Why weren’t they making her into their bitch? She wasn’t complaining, she didn’t mind the fact that they were trying to act like they were all three in this weird dating thing instead of her being their sex-slave. She bit her lip and took a bite of the pasta dish they were eating, it was really good, but she was finding it hard to swallow. She didn’t show her nerves in anyway, but that didn’t mean that they weren’t there.

“May I ask you something (Name)?” Matthew asked her.

“Of course.” She said.

“Did you mean what you said, about not having parents?” he asked, the statement she made earlier was bugging him, but he didn’t know why.

“Yes.” She said simply, “But, if it’s all the same, I’d rather not discuss that.”

He nodded and began discussing sports with his brother, mainly whether hockey was better than baseball, this seemed to be a regular form of disagreement between the two. She didn’t pay much attention and continued to pick at her meal. Her mind began to wander, what was in store for her that evening, definitely it was going to be sexual, but just how far would it go for their first full night together.

She had eaten half of her meal when the two brothers got up, clearing their dishes and she followed suit. They both lead her into the living room and sat where they had been before though their  hands began to wander her body a bit more. Alfred began kissing her and groping her chest as Matthew placed burning kisses and love-bites along her neck and sensually massaging the inside of her thighs. She shuddered and let out muffled sounds finding that both brothers enjoyed the sounds she made.

Soon the brothers pulled away and fixed her disheveled appearance as Oliver came back into the living room, to get to the kitchen to put his now empty bowl into the sink. He walked back through and told them all he was going to bed and then disappeared once more sneezing rather loudly.

“This seems like a good time to discuss the object of who gets what first.” Alfred said.

“Well I say that we let her decide who deflowers her.” Matthew said causing (Name) to get really nervous.

“Um…I…I can’t choose…please…just decide between yourselves.” She said and made herself shrink back, she knew that if she chose one over the other then she might make one of them mad.

“Look, we’ll both get it eventually, but I definitely want the first blow-job.” Alfred said.

“Then I get to take her virginity.” Matthew said, “You want the blow job I get her pussy.”

(Name’s) face would have been aflame if she hadn’t gotten control of that very rational reaction. She bit her lip and allowed them to hash the rest of it out in their…rather colorful vocabulary.

“So who gets her ass?” Alfred asked.

“Hmm…that is a toss-up.” Matthew said, “I don’t think we should push that on her just yet.”

He ran his hand under her skirt and squeezed her inner thigh, while his American brother asked, “Save anal for another day?” the smirk on his face made her body betray her and caused her to blush.

“I…I’d prefer that…if it’s not…t…too much trouble…” she stammered out.

“Of course, mon amour.” Matthew said in his melting French and bit her ear lobe.

“We know how this evening is going to end.” Alfred said, “But it’s still early we can just sit here…unless you want it now.”

He ran his hand even higher and began to tease her through her panties. She bit her lip and shuddered. She understood why her body was reacting so favorably to them, but it was still shocking to her. She let out a squeak as he pressed harder, tempting her more.

“Do you want us?” Matthew asked her and began to rub her inner thigh while sucking her ear lobe while Alfred sucked her neck.

She let out a gently moan and shuddered, they were teasing her again. Her body wanted them. The way they touched and teased drove her mad. She nodded and they smirked and stopped for a moment.

“Let’s just wait until we’re sure that kill-joy is asleep.” Alfred said and Matthew nodded in agreement.

The few moments that they waited not really paying attention to the TV gave (Name) a chance to catch her breath and mentally ready herself for what was to come. She was going to lose her vaginal virginity to Matthew while Alfred took her Oral virginity. She hoped not at the same time, she didn’t think that she could handle something that dirty just yet.


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The brother’s led her to her bedroom and she sat on the bed. Matthew left to retrieve a condom from his bedroom while Alfred sat beside her and pulled her into a forcefully passionate kiss.

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Matthew picked his boxers back up and went to the bathroom attached to (Name’s) room to clean up as Alfred walked over and climbed into bed with her once more.

“Hope you don’t mind if we join you tonight.” He said in a tone that told her she didn’t have a choice.

(Name) shook her head and got comfortable as she could after his brother crawled into bed on her other side. The brothers got comfortable and pulled the blanket over all three of them and soon passed out.

So name found herself with her head resting on the red eyed American’s strong chest while the dark violet eyed Canadian spooned her. Her mind reeled with questions and eventually she found herself drifting off to sleep.
Edit...I am no longer noting the lemon to this...I'm sorry if this is dissapointing to you. Forgive me :iconbegplz:

Does this need a mature content filter?

I do not own Hetalia, 2P!America, 2P!Canada or you.
I do own the story and ideas.
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LunaFireFoxsRed Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I just looked at the date you posted it and its on my birthday, I laughed at it for like a few mins
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TSsweets Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Lol. Awesome.
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LunaFireFoxsRed Featured By Owner Mar 31, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I just finished the last chapter and aww I love it so much, you are and awesome writer. and I love reading your stuff
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TSsweets Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much.
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LunaFireFoxsRed Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Welcome
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TSsweets Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:3
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LunaFireFoxsRed Featured By Owner Apr 2, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
I hope you keep writing 
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TSsweets Featured By Owner Apr 3, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I will. :)
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xXxBlueBird15xXx Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Noooo i was to late TT~TT i wanted to ready the lemooooon ;A;
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TSsweets Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I can put it up on Tumblr, if you like. ^^
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xXxBlueBird15xXx Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Yes pwease and could u send me the link when u have?
P.s. i luv ur stories
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TSsweets Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Of course. 

Thank you. :meow: I'm glad. 
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xXxBlueBird15xXx Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
:33
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TSsweets Featured By Owner Mar 10, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
:hug:
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xXxBlueBird15xXx Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
:iconhuggleplz:
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TSsweets Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
So how are you?
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BloodDragonAlchemist Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014  Hobbyist
May I ask for graphics if you don't want to its fine I love the story so far X3
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TSsweets Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Sorry my response took so long. I've been going through a lot. I am not at this time sending those out. I will however be posting that story to Tumblr soon.
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BloodDragonAlchemist Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Hobbyist
Oh my I'm sorry :hug: I hope you get better soon and if you need to vent I'm here for you :) feel better soon!
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TSsweets Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you. I'm okay just work stress. If I do need it I will definitely take you up on that offer.
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BloodDragonAlchemist Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Hobbyist
That or canada and America 2p can rough up your people causing stress lol
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TSsweets Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I wish I had the 2ps to sic on people. XD
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BloodDragonAlchemist Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist
I do too!!! expecially 2P Canada!!!! :squee:
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TSsweets Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I love 2p!america but I have this habit. I cannot with any scrap of dignity make him a vegan in my stories. I may make him health conscious but I can't take him seriously as a bad ass if he eats tofu. XD JZuzt a quirk.
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JellyMii1130 Featured By Owner Oct 2, 2013
Where is chap 7,link plz ( ´ ▽ ` )ノ
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TSsweets Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
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JZFinland-1 Featured By Owner Aug 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
It doesn't need a content filter. Just a warning at the start at most .
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TSsweets Featured By Owner Aug 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Alright, thanks. Wanted to be sure. 
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OkinaNeko Featured By Owner Aug 10, 2013  Student General Artist
Hello, umm... if it's not too much to ask but can you send me the missing graphic part, please? 
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Tierany-chan Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
*is attempting to process information, black smoke fills room* *is speechless*
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TSsweets Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
:hug: Are you okay. 
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Tierany-chan Featured By Owner Jul 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
*blinks* I... I think so..? *dazed expression*
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LilNineTails Featured By Owner May 21, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
.......*Doesn't know how to......FUCK* GERMAN PROCESSING MALFUNCTION!
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TSsweets Featured By Owner May 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Lol. I'm sorry. Are you alright?
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lissyloveisawesome Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
That must have been terrifying..... gah!




me pasta >:3
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TSsweets Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Mmmhmm.
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lissyloveisawesome Featured By Owner May 22, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
3:
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yugi-chan19 Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013
Love the story.

Sux that you won't be noting the lemon but if you don't wanna you won't.

It's not my place to force people to do things.

Awesome story!
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TSsweets Featured By Owner Mar 8, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thanks and yeah...the more lemons I did the less drive I had.
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JadeyBird Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I love it. I would love it with the note better but I see you stopped and I'm not going to force you lol. Anyway I love the story. It's great and 2p!America and canids are my fav. Your an awesome writer can't wait to read more!
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TSsweets Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Thank you so much. And I'm glad that you love my work. ^^ That means so much to me.
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Hetalia1219 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
:(
Loved the story so far though
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TSsweets Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Glad you loved the story though. ^^
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Hetalia1219 Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
Awww, no more noting........
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TSsweets Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Sorry...it's not that I'm not proud of the lemon work I've done...but I've found that the more I typed and sent them the more that seemed to be what was expected and my motivation to type and post stories was dimming...so i stopped all lemon writing and have found my voice again.
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Hetalia1219 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
Ne! I'm sorry I didn't realize! I really do like the story though!
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TSsweets Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It's alright, I figured I should explain why I chose not to send them out or do more since it's an odd choice to make in many ways. I was not trying to make you feel bad or anything. ^^' And I'm glad you like the story.
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Girlsrule1235 Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013
Can I have Note?
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TSsweets Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I'm not noting it anymore sorry...
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